Comments on: The Queen of Sheba http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/ And other rip roaring yarns Wed, 18 Aug 2010 06:59:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Dana http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-244 Dana Tue, 22 Dec 2009 20:03:57 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-244 Love the ending and the vernacular! Poor Queen of Sheba though :( Love the ending and the vernacular! Poor Queen of Sheba though :(

]]> By: David G Shrock http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-243 David G Shrock Mon, 21 Dec 2009 20:32:28 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-243 Great voice. Haven't read a court-style story in some time. Fantastic ending gave me a giggle. Great voice. Haven’t read a court-style story in some time. Fantastic ending gave me a giggle.

]]> By: karen from mentor http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-238 karen from mentor Sun, 20 Dec 2009 16:27:53 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-238 Oh my gosh lol.....that was just what the day wanted. Now I can go out. Loved the voice, the descriptions and the pacing. "Well, I gave ‘er one with me truncheon." killed me ....and then I thought ...hey, that could be taken two ways.... Oh my gosh lol…..that was just what the day wanted. Now I can go out. Loved the voice, the descriptions and the pacing.

“Well, I gave ‘er one with me truncheon.” killed me ….and then I thought …hey, that could be taken two ways….

]]> By: Eric J. Krause http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-210 Eric J. Krause Sat, 19 Dec 2009 18:03:17 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-210 Loved the constable's voice in this one. Very good story! Loved the constable’s voice in this one. Very good story!

]]> By: Laura Eno http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-209 Laura Eno Sat, 19 Dec 2009 13:54:01 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-209 Humorous and sly as always! Humorous and sly as always!

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-206 Deanna Schrayer Sat, 19 Dec 2009 00:05:57 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-206 You make it so easy to hear your characters Chance, and what a doozy this one is! Great laugh! You make it so easy to hear your characters Chance, and what a doozy this one is! Great laugh!

]]> By: Marisa Birns http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-204 Marisa Birns Fri, 18 Dec 2009 16:07:59 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-204 Humorous in its vernacular dialogue AND Oh! That last line! Heh. Wonderful. Humorous in its vernacular dialogue AND Oh! That last line! Heh.

Wonderful.

]]> By: Shannon Esposito http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/2009/12/the-queen-of-sheba/comment-page-1/#comment-203 Shannon Esposito Fri, 18 Dec 2009 16:00:22 +0000 http://thedeadadventurersclub.com/?p=261#comment-203 Well, of course he bopped her on the head again, what red-blooded male wouldn't. LOL, love the sly humor in the background of your writing. Nice, as always. Well, of course he bopped her on the head again, what red-blooded male wouldn’t. LOL, love the sly humor in the background of your writing. Nice, as always.

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