Comments on: A Cocktale

By: Michelle

Michelle — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 11:52:34 +0000

As many of the comments above I too laughed out loud! Well done.

By: Jared Branch

Jared Branch — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 18:35:11 +0000

You have written a very enjoyable, laugh-out-loud story. I especially liked the last line, though that isn’t to say there weren’t plenty of others that were just as enjoyable. Cheers!

By: Susan Cross

Susan Cross — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 21:20:39 +0000

This is a winner! It takes a lot to make me laugh but you did it. Also, I like the way you made first person, present tense work well together.

By: karen from mentor

karen from mentor — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 02:27:33 +0000

Oh my. I’d put my favorite pun in the comment but how to decide?
So many many grins! A plethora of puns.
I grow to love this character more each week.
Karen :0)

By: Eric J. Krause

Eric J. Krause — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 14:48:46 +0000

Excellent! Had me chuckling throughout. Loved it.

By: Carrie Cleaver

Carrie Cleaver — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 13:57:57 +0000

This was fabulous! I really enjoyed the play on usually taboo words. Thank you for the laugh!

By: Deanna Schrayer

Deanna Schrayer — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 13:19:41 +0000

Oh what fun Chance! I laughed out loud throughout. Love the line “God I ask thee to open the ground and swallow me up.”
Great writing!

By: Skycycler

Skycycler — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 23:26:34 +0000

Move over Blackadder! A great, fun, read.

By: J. Dane Tyler

J. Dane Tyler — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 20:55:13 +0000

Fantastic! Great delivery and the double entendres were wonderful! Excellent job on this! Love the style and language choice for the piece. Very fun!

By: Deb

Deb — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 19:35:55 +0000

LOL — Wonderfully done! Great stuff!